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Poems by LordTomyh

Post by LordTomyh on Mon Jan 23, 2012 10:28 pm

SONG OF INNOCENCE
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My brother, just and kind
Of earthly body and heavenly mind
A being of all that is light and good
A angel with hair the shade of wood

My brother, a fount of wisdom
The seeking son of god's kingdom
A white knight upon his noble steed
A being that even the sun envied

His hidden strength, gained in patience
His heaven blessed gift, his angel brilliance
His searching desire, his star lit knowledge
His righteous mind, made in heaven's image

Like a gentle wind, calm as a forest
Heaven's mortal test
Many see him for silent and wicked
Many stand before him mentally naked

My brother, son of light
God's creation with a soul of white
Heaven's message preached for all to here
My brother just. My brother Tomyh


SONG OF EXPERIENCE
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My brother, twisted and dark
Evil has left its mark
His noble form, his heaven smile
Now twisted and vile

This son of heaven, child of light
Now the angel fallen. His soul no longer white
His blood stained hands, his demonic chains
My heart heavy and filled with pains

His power dark and vile
The earth broken to an isle
His hatred awake. His joy aflame
His satanic figure, a skeletal frame

His sapphire eyes, dead and gone
Now filled with red blood and yellow bone
His tears of compassion, stripped away
Now comes the end of god's twisted play

My brother, his laughter loud in my ears
Swords in hand, Eyes empty of tears
I scream with heaven's grace
As we enter. Our last embrace



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Re: Poems by LordTomyh

Post by Div on Mon Jan 23, 2012 10:29 pm

Wow, very nice. The Rhymes are wonderful and smooth, as well as the vocabulary and imagery.

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Re: Poems by LordTomyh

Post by LordTomyh on Mon Jan 23, 2012 10:30 pm

Thanks ... this was a year 12 Literature SAC based off William Blake's poetry and on of my stories
Would you believe that I suck at Poetry?

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VoilĂ ! In view, a humble vaudevillian veteran, cast vicariously as both victim and villian by the vicissitudes of Fate. This visage, no mere veneer of vanity, is a vestige of the vox populi, now vacant, vanished. However, this valorous visitation of a by-gone vexation, stands vivified and has vowed to vanquish these venal and virulent vermin vanguarding vice and vouchsafing the violently vicious and voracious violation of volition. The only verdict is vengence; a vendetta, held as a votive, not in vain, for the value and veracity of such shall one day vindicate the vigilant and the virtuous. Verily, this vichyssoise of verbiage veers most verbose, so let me simply add that it is my very good honor to meet you and you may call me V.

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My Sister (innocence and Experience)

Post by LordTomyh on Mon Jan 23, 2012 10:32 pm

SONG OF INNOCENCE
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My sister, sweet and fair
Her raven locks, her silken hair
Her star-like eyes
melts the midnight's lies

My Sister, gentle and kind
Light of heart. A righteous mind
One who must defend the weak
One to bring hope when all is bleak

Her hidden strength, earned in sweat
Her earth born power, not easy to forget
Her defending desire. Her granite power
Never in her resolve will she falter

Like a blooming rose, beautiful as a river
dangerous as a river, gentle as a fir
Many see her for gentle and week
Many receive more than a slap on the cheek

My sister, daughter of fate
God's mould broke he could create
A more beautiful creature you'll never see
My sister sweet. My sister Ynobe


SONGS OF EXPERIENCE
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My sister, a creature consumed
Her rage unbound. He love entombed
Her eyes once kind and gentle
Now those of hate and evil

Her hands stained red and bloody
Her fearsome sword stained and dirty
The ice like blade thirsting for my end
And to a higher plane, one of us will ascend

Her magic ripping from her frame
The ground rendered torn and aflame
Her sorrow and rage released
Now her dormant power unleashed

Her angel innocence, her snow white grace
Torn away from fate's loving embrace
Her wings of innocence ripped away
Now comes the end of god's twisted play

My sister, her rage loud in my ears
Sword in hand. Eyes full of tears
I laugh with dark pride
As inside I have died


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VoilĂ ! In view, a humble vaudevillian veteran, cast vicariously as both victim and villian by the vicissitudes of Fate. This visage, no mere veneer of vanity, is a vestige of the vox populi, now vacant, vanished. However, this valorous visitation of a by-gone vexation, stands vivified and has vowed to vanquish these venal and virulent vermin vanguarding vice and vouchsafing the violently vicious and voracious violation of volition. The only verdict is vengence; a vendetta, held as a votive, not in vain, for the value and veracity of such shall one day vindicate the vigilant and the virtuous. Verily, this vichyssoise of verbiage veers most verbose, so let me simply add that it is my very good honor to meet you and you may call me V.

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Re: Poems by LordTomyh

Post by Div on Mon Jan 23, 2012 11:18 pm

Hey, I've merged your two poetry threads together, if you don't mind, please use the EDIT command to add in new poetry Happy

Thankies.

And again, very nice flow and rhyme.

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Re: Poems by LordTomyh

Post by Drag on Tue Jan 24, 2012 5:56 am

Oooh! I like it! Nicley written, flows well, and interesting!

A+ young chap! Tophat Tim

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Re: Poems by LordTomyh

Post by LordTomyh on Tue Jan 24, 2012 9:40 pm

Thank you
I still state I suck at Poetry

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VoilĂ ! In view, a humble vaudevillian veteran, cast vicariously as both victim and villian by the vicissitudes of Fate. This visage, no mere veneer of vanity, is a vestige of the vox populi, now vacant, vanished. However, this valorous visitation of a by-gone vexation, stands vivified and has vowed to vanquish these venal and virulent vermin vanguarding vice and vouchsafing the violently vicious and voracious violation of volition. The only verdict is vengence; a vendetta, held as a votive, not in vain, for the value and veracity of such shall one day vindicate the vigilant and the virtuous. Verily, this vichyssoise of verbiage veers most verbose, so let me simply add that it is my very good honor to meet you and you may call me V.

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Re: Poems by LordTomyh

Post by Drag on Wed Jan 25, 2012 2:53 am

I really like the contrast Happy

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Re: Poems by LordTomyh

Post by LordTomyh on Wed Jan 25, 2012 10:30 am

Thanks ... The innocence is at the start of my story and the experience is near the end

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VoilĂ ! In view, a humble vaudevillian veteran, cast vicariously as both victim and villian by the vicissitudes of Fate. This visage, no mere veneer of vanity, is a vestige of the vox populi, now vacant, vanished. However, this valorous visitation of a by-gone vexation, stands vivified and has vowed to vanquish these venal and virulent vermin vanguarding vice and vouchsafing the violently vicious and voracious violation of volition. The only verdict is vengence; a vendetta, held as a votive, not in vain, for the value and veracity of such shall one day vindicate the vigilant and the virtuous. Verily, this vichyssoise of verbiage veers most verbose, so let me simply add that it is my very good honor to meet you and you may call me V.

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Re: Poems by LordTomyh

Post by Agrapeinthesun on Wed Feb 08, 2012 1:32 pm

Creepy but nice

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MY ALICE OF HUMAN SACRIFICE

Post by LordTomyh on Sun Feb 26, 2012 9:36 am

MY ALICE OF HUMAN SACRIFICE
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The first Alice was a warrior from a magic land.
A fearsome being with a wicked axe, he carved his image across the wonderland.
This new Alice could never lie to die.
Though hunted he was never slain.
Forever he wandered across the wonderland, leaving his blood red path


The second Alice was a haunted young man.
A timid boy with an evil locked away in his heart.
This new Alice could not bear the strain.
And vowed to end the evil for good.
He flung himself from a tower, leaving only a gentle smile.


The Third Alice was an emerald guardian, tall and proud.
A gentle being with the ear of the wind, protecting the wonderland.
This new Alice was betrayed.
And stabbed in the back.
He died forever cursing the name of the traitor.


The fourth Alice were a pair of siblings fair.
An earthly sister and heavenly brother, both playing in the wonderland.
The brother fell to a twisted dream.
And threw himself upon his sister's sword.
Together they parted in one final embrace
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VoilĂ ! In view, a humble vaudevillian veteran, cast vicariously as both victim and villian by the vicissitudes of Fate. This visage, no mere veneer of vanity, is a vestige of the vox populi, now vacant, vanished. However, this valorous visitation of a by-gone vexation, stands vivified and has vowed to vanquish these venal and virulent vermin vanguarding vice and vouchsafing the violently vicious and voracious violation of volition. The only verdict is vengence; a vendetta, held as a votive, not in vain, for the value and veracity of such shall one day vindicate the vigilant and the virtuous. Verily, this vichyssoise of verbiage veers most verbose, so let me simply add that it is my very good honor to meet you and you may call me V.

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Re: Poems by LordTomyh

Post by Div on Mon Feb 27, 2012 12:17 am

Not quite as flowy as your others, but still nice Smile

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Re: Poems by LordTomyh

Post by LordTomyh on Mon Feb 27, 2012 5:38 am

I kinda copied the original Japanese way of writing it. So that's why. Also cause I'm studying poetry that doesn't rhyme for Uni, I thought this was one of those style poems

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Re: Poems by LordTomyh

Post by Div on Mon Feb 27, 2012 9:55 pm

Ahh, I've never been much of a fan of non rhyming poetry XD

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Re: Poems by LordTomyh

Post by LordTomyh on Tue Feb 28, 2012 8:26 am

i never heard of it before my poetry class on tuesday night. Yeah my class goes from 5:00 pm - 9:00 pm

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VoilĂ ! In view, a humble vaudevillian veteran, cast vicariously as both victim and villian by the vicissitudes of Fate. This visage, no mere veneer of vanity, is a vestige of the vox populi, now vacant, vanished. However, this valorous visitation of a by-gone vexation, stands vivified and has vowed to vanquish these venal and virulent vermin vanguarding vice and vouchsafing the violently vicious and voracious violation of volition. The only verdict is vengence; a vendetta, held as a votive, not in vain, for the value and veracity of such shall one day vindicate the vigilant and the virtuous. Verily, this vichyssoise of verbiage veers most verbose, so let me simply add that it is my very good honor to meet you and you may call me V.

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