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Post  LordTomyh on Tue Jan 24, 2012 2:28 am

SONG OF INNOCENCE
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My brother, just and kind
Of earthly body and heavenly mind
A being of all that is light and good
A angel with hair the shade of wood

My brother, a fount of wisdom
The seeking son of god's kingdom
A white knight upon his noble steed
A being that even the sun envied

His hidden strength, gained in patience
His heaven blessed gift, his angel brilliance
His searching desire, his star lit knowledge
His righteous mind, made in heaven's image

Like a gentle wind, calm as a forest
Heaven's mortal test
Many see him for silent and wicked
Many stand before him mentally naked

My brother, son of light
God's creation with a soul of white
Heaven's message preached for all to here
My brother just. My brother Tomyh

SONG OF EXPERIENCE
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My brother, twisted and dark
Evil has left its mark
His noble form, his heaven smile
Now twisted and vile

This son of heaven, child of light
Now the angel fallen. His soul no longer white
His blood stained hands, his demonic chains
My heart heavy and filled with pains

His power dark and vile
The earth broken to an isle
His hatred awake. His joy aflame
His satanic figure, a skeletal frame

His sapphire eyes, dead and gone
Now filled with red blood and yellow bone
His tears of compassion, stripped away
Now comes the end of god's twisted play

My brother, his laughter loud in my ears
Swords in hand, Eyes empty of tears
I scream with heaven's grace
As we enter. Our last embrace


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Post  Damxge on Tue Jan 24, 2012 2:29 am

Wow, very nice. The Rhymes are wonderful and smooth, as well as the vocabulary and imagery.

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Post  LordTomyh on Tue Jan 24, 2012 2:30 am

Thanks ... this was a year 12 Literature SAC based off William Blake's poetry and on of my stories
Would you believe that I suck at Poetry?

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My Sister (innocence and Experience)

Post  LordTomyh on Tue Jan 24, 2012 2:32 am

SONG OF INNOCENCE
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My sister, sweet and fair
Her raven locks, her silken hair
Her star-like eyes
melts the midnight's lies

My Sister, gentle and kind
Light of heart. A righteous mind
One who must defend the weak
One to bring hope when all is bleak

Her hidden strength, earned in sweat
Her earth born power, not easy to forget
Her defending desire. Her granite power
Never in her resolve will she falter

Like a blooming rose, beautiful as a river
dangerous as a river, gentle as a fir
Many see her for gentle and week
Many receive more than a slap on the cheek

My sister, daughter of fate
God's mould broke he could create
A more beautiful creature you'll never see
My sister sweet. My sister Ynobe

SONGS OF EXPERIENCE
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My sister, a creature consumed
Her rage unbound. He love entombed
Her eyes once kind and gentle
Now those of hate and evil

Her hands stained red and bloody
Her fearsome sword stained and dirty
The ice like blade thirsting for my end
And to a higher plane, one of us will ascend

Her magic ripping from her frame
The ground rendered torn and aflame
Her sorrow and rage released
Now her dormant power unleashed

Her angel innocence, her snow white grace
Torn away from fate's loving embrace
Her wings of innocence ripped away
Now comes the end of god's twisted play

My sister, her rage loud in my ears
Sword in hand. Eyes full of tears
I laugh with dark pride
As inside I have died


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Post  Damxge on Tue Jan 24, 2012 3:18 am

Hey, I've merged your two poetry threads together, if you don't mind, please use the EDIT command to add in new poetry Happy

Thankies.

And again, very nice flow and rhyme.

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Post  Drag on Tue Jan 24, 2012 9:56 am

Oooh! I like it! Nicley written, flows well, and interesting!

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Post  LordTomyh on Wed Jan 25, 2012 1:40 am

Thank you
I still state I suck at Poetry

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Post  Drag on Wed Jan 25, 2012 6:53 am

I really like the contrast Happy
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Post  LordTomyh on Wed Jan 25, 2012 2:30 pm

Thanks ... The innocence is at the start of my story and the experience is near the end

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Post  Agrapeinthesun on Wed Feb 08, 2012 5:32 pm

Creepy but nice

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MY ALICE OF HUMAN SACRIFICE

Post  LordTomyh on Sun Feb 26, 2012 1:36 pm

MY ALICE OF HUMAN SACRIFICE
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The first Alice was a warrior from a magic land.
A fearsome being with a wicked axe, he carved his image across the wonderland.
This new Alice could never lie to die.
Though hunted he was never slain.
Forever he wandered across the wonderland, leaving his blood red path


The second Alice was a haunted young man.
A timid boy with an evil locked away in his heart.
This new Alice could not bear the strain.
And vowed to end the evil for good.
He flung himself from a tower, leaving only a gentle smile.


The Third Alice was an emerald guardian, tall and proud.
A gentle being with the ear of the wind, protecting the wonderland.
This new Alice was betrayed.
And stabbed in the back.
He died forever cursing the name of the traitor.


The fourth Alice were a pair of siblings fair.
An earthly sister and heavenly brother, both playing in the wonderland.
The brother fell to a twisted dream.
And threw himself upon his sister's sword.
Together they parted in one final embrace
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Post  Damxge on Mon Feb 27, 2012 4:17 am

Not quite as flowy as your others, but still nice Happy

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Post  LordTomyh on Mon Feb 27, 2012 9:38 am

I kinda copied the original Japanese way of writing it. So that's why. Also cause I'm studying poetry that doesn't rhyme for Uni, I thought this was one of those style poems

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Post  Damxge on Tue Feb 28, 2012 1:55 am

Ahh, I've never been much of a fan of non rhyming poetry XD

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Post  LordTomyh on Tue Feb 28, 2012 12:26 pm

i never heard of it before my poetry class on tuesday night. Yeah my class goes from 5:00 pm - 9:00 pm

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Post  Damxge on Thu Mar 01, 2012 8:49 am

Daaaaang, that's a long class.

I had a math class a few semesters ago that was 7:00 to 9:00 :/
Was a bitch getting to.

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Post  LordTomyh on Thu Mar 01, 2012 1:14 pm

Well all my classes are that long. Just that's the only one after 5
I have three classes in the morning (Tuesday, Thursday and Friday from 9:00 - 1:00) Then one in the afternoon (Monday 1:00 - 5:00) Then that one on Tuesday Night

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Post  cyclonecasey on Mon Apr 16, 2012 4:27 pm

Suck to be you!

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13 Lost Hearts

Post  LordTomyh on Thu Apr 26, 2012 5:40 pm

I
Among the worlds yet born.
Where the superior rule the nothingness
with a heartless body.


II
The archer standing
guard upon the castle.
Starring down on the world that never exists.


III
The beast sailing upon the wind.
The dragon stealing what is precious
from the love lost man.


IV
The cold mind searching for answers
in his kingdom of snow and death.
His only friend, his lifeless tool.


V
The silent hero carrying on.
The dreams of the lost upon his shoulders.
The steady anchor holding strong.


VI
The Child among men.
Playing with a shadow stained book
while wearing the faces of others.


VII
The gold eyed man.
Craving the moon, his love, his strength.
Only anger does he feel.


VIII
The dancing flame
seeking his friends lost to memory.
Taking the stars to be his knives.


IX
The melody of a dancing sea
the man hiding within the ocean.
Singing his despair to the deep.


X
The timeless man, standing
upon the shores of new worlds.
The guardian of man's sins.


XI
The love touched assassin.
The blood stained hands.
The reaper in the rose petals.


XII
The savage beauty, cruel.
Her gentle touch a
rose prick thorn.


XIII
The bearer of future hope.
The boy that stands before the door
and opens the world to the light.


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THE WARRIOR IN RED

Post  LordTomyh on Mon May 14, 2012 1:43 am

A warrior, the first to walk the land.
His hair a cascade the colour of forest green leaves,
his skin the hue of dark violet

A shadow looming,
his eyes like the moon, seen through blue ice.
His body, wreathed in dark twisted plate,
cold as the grip of winter.

Wielding his axe, a wicked rose thorn,
drunk from the blood of innocents slain

Endless hunger, a craving for water thick and red,
unable to sleep, unable to die. A knight,
of shadow.
Forever haunted, forever followed,
by a bloody river.


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Post  killer8529 on Wed May 16, 2012 7:46 pm

nice

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Post  Legotransform on Fri May 18, 2012 5:42 pm

Awesome!A+ Chap 👼 :hat:

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Post  LordTomyh on Sat Sep 01, 2012 3:05 pm

Endless
eternity.
Forever young and ageless.
Is this a blessing? or a curse?
Endless.

TWISTED REALITY
Twisted
reality.
Maybe it’s just a dream,
is this reality or not?
Help me!

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Post  LordTomyh on Sat Sep 01, 2012 3:05 pm

Darkness reining on high, night,
eternal, bearing down on mankind.
Animals betraying the natural order and,
tears of acid rain upon the broken earth.
Hovels erected from dirt and bone,
in fields where the,
Skeletons of cities lie rusting in slow decay.
Oceans gone, now endless desert of grey,
now only endless land, baked by the sun,
life burning in endless light
Yellow skies flecked with a ball of blood,
torturing the wasteland grey. Rain from
hell destroying everything soft in flesh.
Endless death across the land, only mountains
still stand. The teeth of
titans long gone. The bones of
Atlas lying forgotten as the world falls
ruined and broken.
This is how the world ends

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Post  LordTomyh on Sat Sep 01, 2012 3:05 pm

There was a young man from Scotland
who everyone thought was so bland.
So he went to the mall.
Showed himself in a stall.
And got sent back to Scotland.

There was a young man named Bryon
who laughed and had a pet lion.
He forgot o feed it one night.
So it ate him alright.
And everyone laughs poor Bryon

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